Whose Story Is It? Self-Editing for Point of View

by Joel Friedlander on March 6, 2015 · 6 comments

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By Rachel E. Newman

When I first realized my passion for editing, I had long recognized my love for books and stories. During my adolescent years, I read voraciously; and by the time I decided to pursue editing, I believed I could recognize a well-written novel within a few sentences. Surely I would be a natural.

It was with great anticipation I began my first editing fiction course. I still remember that initial editing assignment. The paragraph had emotion; it had character; it sounded so good. And then comments from my more experienced classmates started rolling in. The excerpt had problems with repetitive language, shallow point of view, and unnecessary speaker attributions. Once it had been edited and portions of it rewritten, the finished product was head and shoulders above the original paragraph.

At that point I realized just how much I needed to learn. And the process of learning has been one of pure joy. Discovering how to communicate images and ideas in a way that makes the text disappear and the story come alive has opened a whole new avenue for connecting with people. And people, after all, is what I’m about.

That’s why I’d like to share some of what I’ve learned to help you polish your manuscript and save money. Although self-editing does not eliminate your need for a professional editor, it can cut down on the amount of time it takes to complete a professional edit which in turn could save you lots of money. Even the best editors will tell you that professional editors have their work professionally edited.

Our brains have the amazing capability to see what should be there instead of what is there. We might read over a sentence fifteen times and never realize it’s missing a the or contains a misspelled word. (I must have read that last sentence at least eight times before I realized I’d left the s off “times.”) That’s why it’s so important to have a fresh pair of eyes do that final edit.

There are many changes you can make, though, before you submit your manuscript to an editor. Keep in mind that while writing your first draft you shouldn’t concern yourself with editing. Editing and writing use different parts of your brain, and you don’t need the distraction editing will cause while you are emptying your creative genius onto your keyboard. But once you’ve got that first tornado of a story down, it’s time to start looking at it critically. What works and what doesn’t?

One of the first set of questions to ask yourself is:

  • Whose story is it?
  • Who is telling the story?
  • How far away from the reader is the story taking place?

The answers to these questions will help you determine the appropriate point of view in which to tell the story.

Omniscient

Omniscient point of view gives your readers the opportunity to experience the story through the eyes of someone outside of the story. This puts the reader at quite a distance from the characters. It’s as if the reader is hovering over the action and watching it take place far below. Although the story may “belong” to one of the characters, it is being told to your readers by a narrator. The narrator will have his own distinct voice that is separate from the voices of your characters.

If your story is written in omniscient point of view, you want to edit for consistency in voice. The words you use in the narrative should be those the narrator would choose, and they should be arranged in a way the narrator would say them. Dialogue, however, should be unique to your characters’ voices. If all your characters sound just like the narrator when they speak, you’ve got a problem and it’s time to start editing.

The advantages to omniscient point of view are that the narrator can address the reader directly and the reader can be privy to information the characters may not know.

The greatest disadvantage is that your readers will not experience the story as if they are in the story. They won’t get lost in the life of a character as if they were the ones living the adventure. Instead, they will be constantly reminded they are being told a story. If that is the goal of your novel, omniscient point of view may be the way to go.

First and Third Person

First and third person point of view are similar in that the readers accompany only one character at a time. These points of view put the readers right in the middle of the action, and if the point of view is deep enough, your readers will feel like they have become the character.

A book written in third person can take the reader into more than one character’s head when the scene changes or a new chapter begins. (It is extremely difficult to change the point of view character within the middle of a scene and often results in head-hopping. Don’t even try this until you have mastered one character at a time.)

If you are writing in first person point of view, you are generally stuck with that one character throughout the novel. One thing to watch for in this point of view is inappropriate narrative. It will be tempting to launch into back story or lengthy descriptions. You wouldn’t walk into your living room and conjure up images of the history of your couch, so don’t do a similar thing in your writing. It needs to be authentic, and that means you will have to include relevant historical details in a way that would naturally come to the character’s mind. If you add explanations simply for the benefit of your readers, it will remind your readers that they are reading a story instead of experiencing those events themselves. This disrupts the transparency of the words and interrupts the flow of the novel.

When editing these points of view, the question to keep in mind is, would the character know this information? For instance if your point of view character is Bill, and he just turned his back to Mary, Bill can no longer see what Mary is doing. Hence, don’t go into detail about Mary’s actions. Bill may, however, still be able to hear Mary behind him, so you are more than welcome to describe the noises being made.

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